Episode One - Feedback and Views Data

We have posted our first episode on to Vimeo so that the public can view our episodes. Since 26th of January we have received 174 views on Vimeo, from others watching our first episode. However, we were, again, hoping for some comments and some things that people may want us to change about the episodes but these images show that we have had no comments.

Episode Two - Feedback and View Data

We have posted our second episode on to YouTube so that the public can view our episodes. Since 29th of January we have received 74 views on YouTube, from others watching our second episode. However, we were hoping for some comments and some things that people may want us to change about the episodes but these images show that we have had no comments.

Feedback episode 1

Positive
Good Opening Sequence x 2
Good establishing shots x 2
Good sound track
Milk shake shot good
Confident Characters
Well acted in places x 3
Good range of shots


Negative
Tried way to hard to be funny
Girl isn't good actor
James way too extreme
Sound level not the same
Out side shot - flashback - needs to be clearer
Shots when characters look into camera don't work
Music cuts too quick
Way too long x 2
Too much swearing x 3
Not bleeped properly x 3
Alex's character changes too much
Shots look studenty
Should close up on cans
Too angry
Flashback too repetitive
Nobody does detention in a computer room
Characters kinda dull
Credits too fast
Door scene does not make sense x 2
Pier isn't french enough?
Too much fade out
Music too loud made them jump x 2
Unrealistic Characters

Feedback of Episode Two

Here is the class feedback our group got of episode two of Detention Deficit:

Negative:

- Background sound needed at the start x3

- Dull

- Tries too hard to be funny, just makes it worse x2

- Keith totally unbelievable x2

- Not much story-line

- Continuity not good - Different rooms etc. x2

- Acting still poor x2

- Ignored advice for different actors

- Ending dull

- Mindless violence - Not needed x3

- Sound is fuzzy x3

- Episode is still too long

- Character Chris is unexplained x2

- Shot cut mid-sentence

- Hayden's character [Keith] is laughing in a shot - Out of character

- Shots of Hayden don't flow x2

- Hayden's character is 'just annoying'

- Close up of James doesn't work x5

- Nearly all of the shots are mid-shots, needs more variation

- The Trapped title is too short

- Over confident acting

- Last shot doesn't work as well as intended

- Didn't explain scene change

- Foot breaking not believable

- Amy could act better

- Sounds are a bit off at times x2

- Looked at the camera

- Teacher at the end is strange x2

- Spelling of character's names is inconsistent

- Character interactions are good

- Too long considering the 90 second rule x2

- Alexander/James scene too long

- "For who?" line too over reacted

- Foot break SFX was off

- Audio doesn't 'fit in'

- Script not quite tight enough, should be 'laugh every two seconds'

- Just kids being stupid

Positive:

- Title sequence good

- Chris is a good new character x2

- Matt's character [Vince] is awesome

- Improved episode length to last episode

- Better setting to last episode x2

- Alexander's character [Pier] is a lot better this time

- Cuts are good

- Good story-line

- Teacher seen at the door at the end, works well, adds to the comedy

- Better script to last episode x2

- Better camera work and cinematography x3

- No swearing makes it much better

- Fast and slow cuts

- More lines and interaction

- Better than episode one by far

- Acting is great x2

- Abusive terms are witty

- Colours on the wall are good

- Matt's acting is very good

- Editing was good with better fades and transitions

- False punch is good

Feedback From Episode Two

Here are some screen grabs from our Facebook fan page. We have also posted episode two on this page and this screen grab shows some of the feedback we received from people viewing episode two from Facebook.

Feedback From Episode One

Here are some screen grabs from our Facebook fan page. We have posted each episode on this page and these screen grabs show some of the feedback we received from people viewing them from Facebook.

Filming

today we filmed the promo episode of Detention Deficit
(this is some photo of us filming the first episode of Detention Deficit)

Loz's review
was a combination of a well productive day and a stressfull day. after being moved out of two other room we started to shoot in the 3rd room we made good progress but we had a free distractions that slowed down progress but after the some taking charge by james we ended up getting all the footage filmed even with the constant distractions.

Twitter Page

As well as producing two Facebook pages we have also made a Twitter page. This will be another way in which the audience or fans will be able to see how the production is going and also get information on the episodes and how to see them. Anyone on Twitter will be able to follow this page and be able to get hold of links to other pages we have or will create.
Below is an image of this page and a link to it.

http://twitter.com/anarchy_flow

Facebook Pages

We have made two pages on Facebook which anyone in world is free to join. One of the pages is a fan page, where people can become a fan of Detention Deficit, it gives them some information on the series and a regular update of the progress with the show. So far we have been advertising for people to audition for act within the series and this hasn't yet got very far but we have been making good progress with the number of fans.
Below is an image of this page.














We have also made a group page on Facebook, where people can join the group and again see any updates and progress. So far there hasn't been any posts on this page but we hope to have a lot more as the production goes on.
Below is an image of this page.

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